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fredag 25 november 2011

My own ghost story

   Evil book...
This story is about the strongest, the dangerest and the evilest thing alive. It is not a ghost or a dragon. It is about a book. The book the story is about I hope you never read. Who know,s it might be this story... You might be one of the unlucky people. 
It started a long time ago. It was a dark, could, rainy night filled with thunder and fright. A lonly man called for help. Nobody was there so nobody could hear. He saw a house. He went in and nobody was there not even a mouse. He only saw a book and decided to take a look. He read and read the ghost story. He was scared, but coldn’t stot reading something was wierd. He tried to stop but the book was controling him. All sudenly a giant arm came out of the book and the man it took. It took im into the bok he read. What had hapend was he dead? Years have went and mor people hade into the book been sent. 
But one guy tried to destroy the book but it didn’t work. He tried because hade seen the book when it a man took. The book the evil book the poor man took. -Nooo! the man screamed and wanted the hand to let go. No person read the book in a long time and many years later at  a Halloween party, a man read the book and guess what the book took. It took all the people that were there, yes everyone and the party was no longer fun. 
The book hade took one boy’s dad and that made the boy really mad. He took the book. He was planing to the book of evil destroy, but the book takes the boy. 
So far the people in the book have been inside the book dead or only could wait in lot’s of years over 128.
Time went by and more people into the book disapeared or did they die? But one night a man the book would fight. He was strong but what he did was wrong. The book took him. Ok you are probaly tired of only reading about the book taking people. Sorry. Time hade gone and 1988 was the year that was on. One man hit the book with a fryingpan. Guess who the book took. The book got thrown into the zoo and the cows said moo (ok there are probaly not cows at the zoo). A man hade not heard about the book so he took a look. You allready know what will hapen.
Time hade went for the book of hate and it is 2008. The power of the book had grown because of all the people it inside it it had thrown. It just wanted more, soon it would be war.
Time hade gone intill year 3052. People had tried lot’s of time’s and way’s. Some people hade wasted lot’s day’s (to find a way to defeat the book). The war was on and lot’s of people where gone.
It’s year 5089 people have started to forget about the book and think that that everything is fine.  But one day the book more people took. People think about what to do. Nothing workes that they try and lot’s of inesint people diapear or die. 
Time has went and more people into the book been sent. But one dark, could, rainy night filled with thunder and fright. One man find’s a little house. Nothing in there, not even a mouse. No he suddenly sees this book. He takes a look. It says to defeat the devil book this book you will need or you won’t succsed. This book (The book of good) and The devil book must fight. The strongest one will win. This book get’s stronger by being close to good friends and the other book get’s stronger by taking people into it and when alive things get hurt. This is the story about the 2 book’s. Lot’s of millions of millions of millions years befor the unevurse exiced two book’s were made to protecked the unevurse that was going to come. But one of the book’s got blood on it and became evil because of it (ok it is strange that it says that it became evil because this book was made befor it got evil). They fought and were just as strong but the evil book got stronger because the other book got hirt so he wone because of that and hid the good book. The man who read that got a plan. He took the book and  away. He was training the book. But one day when it was raining, the good book was sent to fight the Devil book. They faught and at the end the good book wone and the Devil book was done. All the people that were stuck in the book got free, a man, a pan,  a dog, a log, a book, a dinosaur and much more. Jippy, they were free. But some guy hade invented a new bomb and he blow up the world. Be careful what you read it might be evil. Now to make the story scarier school, school, school. The end.
Deleated sceans. Some people that were full of rage ended up on the 11’th page. 
Som inventor invented a thing called Robo King but the book ate that thing.
A guy took a try but the book would not die, he didn’t know why. But guess what hapend to him. 
Some people tried to reachurt’s the book but that was the last of those guy’s. They weren’t so wise.
A ghost tought it wouldn’t effect him.  His suprise wasen’t very nice.
   

4 kommentarer:

  1. Sorry my story is bad. It is the same thing over and over again. My rhymes are bad and mostly the same over and over again. By the way every sentence doesn't have a rhyme. Sorry.

    SvaraRadera
  2. I haven't read it after it got double checked for it to be right.

    SvaraRadera
  3. Ok this story is never going to be read by anyone. I can understand that nobody is going to read it.

    SvaraRadera
  4. You have a great imagination and it shows in your story. You make it esay for the reader to get a feeling of the story using both scary things mixed with explanations (where you explain things like the cows at the zoo) in your writing. It shows that you like to write texts, or am I wrong?

    SvaraRadera